Photo Courtesy of Iquanyin Moon |
The fire flickered,
casting warm shadows
across the cool sand
as the full moon winked
and nodded approval.
Bare feet and
pearlescent bodies
splashed and skipped
amongst the incoming tide
while marshmellow kisses,
giggling games of hide and seek,
and warm foamy beer
were enjoyed by
Mom and Dad
during their romantic
weekend get-away.
by Margaret Bednar
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My 16 year old daughter laughed and said what I wrote was disturbing. I guess her parents are "over-the-hill" at the old age of 45ish (teenagers are so endearing!) Alas, it is fiction. The above is a Fiction 55 for "One Stop Poetry's One Shoot Sunday" (a story in 55 words or less). The photographer is Iquanyin Moon of Hawaii. Please click on One Shoot Sunday if you would like to read other creative writing or poetry submissions for the above photo prompt.
This is also my submission for Friday Flash 55. Tell a story in 55 words or less. Click HERE to be transported to G-Man's (aka "Mr. Know It All") Blog to read more short stories. I apologize to those who have already read it... but we are busy this weekend with the musical - "Nunsense-Amen". My husband is Sister Robert Ann. Needless to say, I have to work on getting this image out of my brain before any frolicking on the beach is possible...
This is also my submission for Friday Flash 55. Tell a story in 55 words or less. Click HERE to be transported to G-Man's (aka "Mr. Know It All") Blog to read more short stories. I apologize to those who have already read it... but we are busy this weekend with the musical - "Nunsense-Amen". My husband is Sister Robert Ann. Needless to say, I have to work on getting this image out of my brain before any frolicking on the beach is possible...
Comments
Mickie - Thank you for "jumping" :) I will have to check out the book- how exciting. I will let you know how I like it - I still have young kids to read to.
I love the photograph you chose for this.
♥.•*¨ Elizabeth ¨*•.♥
Margaret, that Pic is priceless!
Loved your 55 My Friend.
You have LOTS of literary lee-way with me!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
I like your post, and your 55, and Sister Robert Ann. And your daughters reaction . . kids are like that, are they not?
All good wishes.
PS Your first link didn't work because some extra characters crept into your URL after "html"
Thanks, everyone, for enjoying this effort. "What are we gonna do about kids today?" ( to the tune of the Broadway song)...