Microfiction Monday#71, "Divine Revelation"

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Leaving detention, Sam had a divine revelation.

It helped her survive four years.

There is light at the end of the tunnel.

Even in hell.

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The above is for "Microfiction Monday #71".  Tell a story or caption in 140 characters or less. Give it a try and enter by clicking HERE or read other entries for the above photo prompt.  

Comments

Pat said…
Clever take on the photo! I guess getting out of prison would be like going into the light...the light of freedom.
February 20, 2011 at 8:27 PM
Rinkly Rimes said…
Oh the freedom of that light at the end of the tunnel!
February 20, 2011 at 9:08 PM
Melanie Sherman said…
Oh yeah, the angst of high school prison. Go toward the light. Save yourself. :)
February 20, 2011 at 9:33 PM
Peggy said…
With light, freedom can follow.
Liked your take on the pic.
These are fun and so diverse.
Have a nice week.
February 20, 2011 at 9:46 PM
Anyes said…
Now that's being optimistic isn't it? Good one though
February 20, 2011 at 11:33 PM
Gemma Wiseman said…
That last line is a winning piece of irony! Very clever!
February 21, 2011 at 12:26 AM
Linda O'Connell said…
Hi Margaret,
I ma new to Micro Fiction Mondays and am scouting the blogs. I signed on as a follower. Please do the same on my blog http:lindaoconnell.blogspot.com
Your interests appea to be as varied as mine.
February 21, 2011 at 4:38 AM
Lisa Gordon said…
Really like this, and such a perfect shot to go with it!
As always, so nicely done!
February 21, 2011 at 9:08 AM
Doctor FTSE said…
It's a long way to the light, though!
February 21, 2011 at 9:29 AM
Diane said…
She sure is trying to be optimistic there.... :O)
February 21, 2011 at 9:34 AM
Sylvia K said…
This is a terrific one for the day -- even if it is a long way to the light!! Hope you have a great week!

Sylvia
February 21, 2011 at 10:03 AM
Maude Lynn said…
Well done! I like the intensity.
February 21, 2011 at 10:05 AM
Lisa Ricard Claro said…
Nicely done! I have a teen at home who would say she relates. :)
February 21, 2011 at 12:29 PM
Reflections said…
Oh, I really like this one. Even a light at the end of the tunnel, in hell... smiles. think it's a burning light, hope it doesn't burn itself out.
February 21, 2011 at 2:17 PM
Susan Fobes said…
A comparison of school to hell? LOL! Nicely done!
February 21, 2011 at 5:43 PM
Anonymous said…
I am so happy that the light at the end of the tunnel didn't turn out to be a train!!! LOL. Good microfiction this week. Cheers~
February 22, 2011 at 6:32 PM
Margaret said…
Thank you for all the comments. I enjoyed all your takes as well. How fun is this? :)
February 23, 2011 at 9:26 AM
Jannie Funster said…
No more teachers.
No more books!!

A great little microfiction, Margaret!

I must make YOUR sidebar button next.

xo
February 23, 2011 at 8:21 PM
Jannie Funster said…
Okay, young artsy lady. YOUR button is up on my site!

And it was WONDERFUL to sift through your different pages while looking for your button graphic, and learn more about you and your amazingly artsy kids.

peace and love to you!!

xoxo
February 23, 2011 at 9:26 PM
Crystal said…
I like this! Never heard of microfiction...I am a bit wordy myself, but it is very intriguing. :-)
February 24, 2011 at 5:55 AM
Margaret said…
Jannie - I love the button! I am honored and amazed. Thank you, thank you for your compliments. They really do go straight to my heart.

Art2cee2 - I know you can do it - you are very creative and talented. And I LOVE your horse paintings!
February 24, 2011 at 8:20 AM
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